Psy. 409
Nov. - 14 - 1995
W/ Dr. Leon James
Week 12 Report
As for links, Yoon includes in his reports several links to different sites but he also eliminates some (e.g. links to search tools or to sites that he reported on). He doesn't just name the links as they appear on the original site but rather tends to elaborate on them which I found very helpful and creative. For the reader's convenience, Yoon often includes links that say "for more information click here..."
Besides being fixated on the query "parenting," Yoon doesn't only report on the sites that he found, he also discusses their content, style, tone, and their use to social psychology. Sometimes he mentions to whom or to what audience the sites were designed and whether he found the search tools efficient.
Also, in his later team reports, Yoon became more creative. He made his reports more catchy and interesting to the viewer's eye by including the sites logos. In a sense, it is an efficient and easy method to decorate a page. In addition, he got little bit (but not completely) off "parenting" issues and explored sites on family and health, and mail-order brides.
Areas for Yoon to
improve:
1) make sure to create links to all the
sites that you report on; 2) go behind the level of reporting what site you
have found by elaborating on your thoughts, views, and feelings (yet, don't
display tears) about the site or document; 3) Focus less on the "parenting" issues and try to explore
other topics. Note: these recommendations do not apply only to Yoon but
also to me and other Generation Two students.
The first half of their team reports varies in content and structure, depending on whose turn was to report. Basically, these team members took team reports in its literal sense (with some exception to Cynthia). That is, they briefly summarize what sites they have found and what those sites provide. Sometimes they included UNIX and HTML commands (which I found very helpful) but other then that their reports were rather plain. Although each of them explored different sites, which makes their reports more comprehensive, they did not include their thoughts and views about those sites. Therefore, they have eliminated critical issues such as the document's tone and style, its use to social psychology as they see it, and their opinions, thoughts and feelings while exploring those sites.
Curtis and Ryan tended to report in a similar style: "see what Cynthia, Curtis, and Ryan found..." and then went on to report what they and others have found. Cynthia, on the other hand, reported in a "we" style, hence, her reports were more cohesive since for her it was a group and not an individual effort. Also, when it was her turn to report she did mention the use of sites explored to social psychology, but she didn't discuss how? Not only that, Cynthia, Curtis and Ryan did not mention how they stumbled upon their search queries and they usually provide sites with no links to them.
From week 8 on the team changed their team reports format by reporting individually on their findings. Therefore, they put more effort into their reports, thus, were less affected by the social-loafing syndrome. For example, Curtis starts to describe what search engines he used and how many hits he got for his search queries. Also, he provides links to sites and discusses the document's contents. Yet, he still doesn't elaborate or speculate on the site's use to social psychology. Ryan continues to give brief "reports" on several sites but no more than that, and Cynthia tries to cover all issues, but there is a lot of room for improvement. (See above for some ways to improve your reporting skills).
I usually try to relate the use of the sites I have explored to social psychology. Yet, some sites make contributions to social psychology and some don't. Therefore, at the end of each team report I try to make sense of what I have found, and determine how each of them contributes not only to social psychology but to humanity as a whole.